"Me-Shellee" Creative Poetry Therapy

Products Analysis

Dahlia Lorenz

(lorenz@tx.technion.ac.il)

A Thesis Submitted for the Degree "Doctor of Philosophy"

University of Haifa

School of Education

Department of Education

July, 1993

"Me-Shellee" Creative Poetry Therapy

Products Analysis

Dahlia Lorenz

Supervised by:

Dr. H. Bruen

Prof. M. Moore

A Thesis Submitted for the Degree

"Doctor of Philosophy"

University of Haifa

School of Education

Department of Education

July, 1993


"Me-Shellee" Creative Poetry Therapy

Products Analysis

Dahlia Lorenz

ABSTRACT

The meaning of poetry therapy is the use of poetry and its accompanying interactive processes to achieve therapeutic goals and enhance personal growth. Its main purpose is the persons' well being resulting from the integration of awareness emotion and imagination.

Poetry therapy has two directions: reading poetry and writing poetry. Most of the research is related to the reading of poetry during therapy. The professional literature is pointing out the wide theoretical background, derived from the fields of poetry and therapy, in contrast to the applied research which is wanting. Researchers report enormous enthusiasm with reading and writing poetry in a great variety of therapies. The findings of most of them relate to functional improvement and to "improved feelings" of the patients.

This study deals with the analysis of products written in poetry therapy workshops (me-Shellee - Creative Poetry Therapy) by children, youths and adults from a variety of populations, while reacting to similar stimulations.

There are no known systematic studies of products analysis since they are considered as accompanying the therapeutic process rather than as its core.

The purpose of this study is to present a practical tool of creative poetry therapy from an educational point of view. It's systematic application in the educational system may contribute to growth and development in the domain of mental health for the entire population.

The aim of the study is to investigate the products of creative poetry therapy workshops. The poetry products are seen as coded communicational messages. Their analysis into components by literary and psychological methods may supply information about their characteristics and the general human nature of their addresses.

The uniqueness of this study is its relating to therapy through the mediacy of the product. The attempt to identify in the product therapeutic poetic characteristics emanating from the very nature of poetry, and to discover in it expressions indicating psychological needs, may illuminate poetry therapy from a different angle.

This systematic analysis of products over a wide range, is a novel approach in the field of poetry therapy. The underlying questions of this study were to determine whether:

  1. The products are indeed poems, i.e., whether they posses typical poetic characteristics.
  2. The speaking "me" appears in the first person and whether there exists a connection to the subject to which it relates.
  3. An expression can be identified which exhibits feelings.
  4. A dominating viewpoint can be identified.
  5. Different content characteristics can be identified among the diverse products.
  6. The products contain expressions indicating definite psychological needs.
  7. The participants themselves are aware of the therapeutical effect they have experienced in the workshop.

Another question has to do with variance: whether the variance in the subjects is more profound than the variance in the groups as opposed to the reasonable assumption that the differences between the groups are so significant that they effect the products.

The study involves 330 products which were randomly sampled out of 1146 products written by participants of 11 creative poetry therapy workshops, on 6 given subjects. 275 products were sampled from the products of the ongoing writings of the groups and 55 from the very last writing. In each workshop there were 15-20 participants: school pupils from standard schools, special education and gifted children, students of education and teachers. All workshops met for 12 weeks, an hour and a half each week. The variables studied were the characteristics of the groups and the characteristics of the products.

The products were analyzed and its characteristics were coded by preassigned criteria related to accepted literary and psychological forms. The analysis relates to five subjects:

  1. literary characteristics,
  2. the speaking "me",
  3. general attitudes and feelings,
  4. psychological needs,
  5. therapeutic criteria.

The workshops were conducted by leaders who studied the principles of creative poetry therapy and activated them in identical fashion in all the experimental groups. The workshops were structured; the subject to be written on was given by name only, and the product was written as the first spontaneous reaction to this stimulus, without leading or criticism.

The environment of openness, respect and acceptance of every writer and his products is typical of the whole process. The 5 subjects which were sampled are "me", "a flower", "a hand", "a cloud", and "darkness". The sixth product was sampled in the last meeting of the workshop and its subject was "Me-shellee of my own". This subject is different from the others by being related to the whole process in the workshop (feed-back).

The products were classified by subjects and groups. The first five were analyzed by literary and psychological criteria. The sixth was analyzed by content criteria only. A comparison between numerical averages was made for the nominal parameters. The statistical analysis was done by F test for variance analysis of continuous variables. The content analysis was done by objective criteria in a systematic way for every item. The reliability of the research tools was obtained through the agreement of independent referees.

The examination of the appearance of poetic characteristics in the products such as short lines, rhythm, rhyme, repetitions, anaphoras and images, indicates that the products possess these characteristics. It was found that an "average product" has 7 lines, with 4 words in each line. A systematic rhythm appears in 75% of the products examined. Rhythm of 4 beats is the dominating one, occurring in 60% of the products. A rhyme of some sort appears in 83% of the products. Words which are repeated at least twice and anaphoras appear in all the subjects and all the groups.

A variety of images are frequently found in most products. Words and verbs in the first person ("me-words") occurred in almost all products, about one fifth of all words, on the average. Expressions for a variety of emotions were found in the products; at least one such expression appears in each one. An optimistic overall point of view was found in 56% of the products. A pessimistic one was found in 18%, and a "mixed" point of view in 26% of the products.

The content characteristics of the "world of images", were counted and classified into categories. 20-26 categories were found for each subject. The similarity among the categories in the various groups and the nuances within each of them, emphasize the uniqueness (variety among categories) and the universality (the same categories for all groups) of the products.

As to the expression of psychological needs: In all subjects such an expression was found directly or indirectly through the metaphors. It was found that the need for love and belonging is uppermost in the hierarchy, followed by the need for being appreciated, and then the need for self fulfillment. The need for security is next and the physiological needs are last.

In the "me" subject a strong need for appreciation was found, followed by a strong need for love. In the "flower" subject, a strong need for love was followed by a strong need for fulfillment. In the "hand" subject a strong need for love was followed by a strong need for appreciation. In the "cloud" subject, a strong need for love was followed by a strong need for appreciation and fulfillment. In the "darkness" subject a strong need for security was found, followed by a strong need for love and fulfillment.

Analysis of the feed-back product (of the last session) indicates that the participants are aware of the effects of the creative poetry therapy workshop. The indication of "enhancing self confidence" was noted in 98% of these products, "joy" was found in 76%, "catharsis" in 73%, "learning" in 60%, "enhancing social confidence" in 52%, and "initial difficulty" in 36% of the products.

The variance-analysis was to examine the significance of the variance of the literary and psychological characteristics in the products of the five subjects (excluding the final one) with respect to the groups and the subjects. Significant variance in the subjects was found in 4 anaphoras and in psychological needs for security and for appreciation. Significant variance in the groups was found in the number of words per product and in double anaphoras. In both groups and subjects, significant variance was found in the number of lines, and in the psychological needs of fulfillment. Significant interaction was found in threefold repetitions of a word, the "wealth of images", the number of "me words", and in the relation to the "me". It was also found in the presence of feelings, physiological needs and needs for love and belonging.

Groups that differ in their population: Groups of adults as compared with groups of children, groups of gifted children as compared with groups of children having learning difficulties and a group of youths. The leading theme of the research is that despite the profound differences in the composition of the groups, the products written in response to identical stimulations are similar in all groups. The similarity is present in the poetic indicators, and in the expression for psychological needs. The difference is apparent in the unique content structure of each product.

It was found that the products are short "me poems", mostly with simple and "catchy" rhythms and rhymes. A variety of feelings is present with an appeal to images and senses. Moreover, psychological needs are voiced in all products, among them the need for love and belonging being most profound.

The group attitude of the writer is not the sole effector of the characteristics in the products.

Analysis of the feed-back products strengthens the notion of the therapeutic effect of the creative poetry therapy process. There exists parallelism between the need of the "me", the direct or indirect metaphorical answer to these needs in the products and the conscious expression in the feed-back product. "Catharsis" in feed-back relates, perhaps, to the answer to "stress", "afraid", "sad", "closed", "alone", in the products; "enjoyment", "enhancing self confidence" relates, perhaps, to the very success in writing and in beholding the products.

The quantitative study proves that the products are poems and that they are an answer to psychological needs. The qualitative aspects of the study relate to products as therapeutic messages, and this for the following reasons:

  1. Direct or indirect personal material expressed in writing enables the creation of a psychological distance between the writer and his product.
  2. The poem has many facets; it contains expressions of thoughts and feelings together with beating rhythms. Thus it may also aid its writer to accept himself with all his components (integration of awareness and feelings).
  3. An "inner map" which is spread outside exposed to all participants of the creative poetry therapy group, may help in seeing the uniqueness and universality in each one.

Poetry therapy wishes to purposely activate therapeutic processes such as catharsis, insight, widening of self confidence, and the enhancing of uniqueness and universality through poetry writing.

It is therefore worthwhile to let it be integrated in the educational system as part of a developmental programme aimed to enhance the individual's strength to promote his mental health and improve its quality.

Table of Contents (Hebrew Thesis)

Page Abstract ................................................VI

List of Tables ..........................................XII

List of Illustrations ...................................XVI

List of Diagrams ........................................XVII

Prolog .................................................. 1

A. Introduction

Chapter 1: Poetry Therapy: Definition, History and Importance .............................. 3

  1. Definition of the concept poetry therapy 3
  2. Poetry ........................... 4
  3. Therapy .......................... 5

1.1.2.1. Therapy in education 6

1.2. History of poetry therapy ............... 7

Chapter 2: Review of Literature ......................... 10

  1. Theoretical aspects ..................... 10

2.1.1. Poetry therapy and creative art .. 10

2.1.2. Poetry therapy and bibliotherapy.. 12

2.1.3. Poetry therapy and creative writing ................. 14

2.1.4. Poetry therapy and psychological needs .............. 17

2.1.5. Poetry therapy and poetry ........ 19

2.1.6. Basic concepts of poetry therapy.. 21

2.1.7. Basic assumptions of poetry therapy........................... 24

2.1.8. Aims of poetry therapy ........... 25

2.1.9. Sources of creative poetry therapy - summary ......... 26

2.2. Applied aspects ......................... 30

2.2.1. Problems brought out by studies of poetry therapy ..... 41

Chapter 3: "Me-Shellee" ** Creative Poetry Therapy Workshop ............................. 44

  1. The "Me-Shellee" model and its characteristics ................. 44

3.2. Poetry therapy in groups ................ 46

  1. The group aspect of therapy by creative art ....... 46

3.2.2. The group activity in the "Me-Shellee" workshop ..... 48

3.3. "Me-Shellee" in practice ................ 51

Chapter 4: The Significance of the Research and its Questions ............................ 56

  1. The rational of the research ............ 56

4.2. The uniqueness of the research .......... 56

4.3. Products written in creative poetry therapy workshops ....... 57

4.3.1. Models of products by structure .. 58

4.3.2. Models of products by sounds ..... 61

4.3.3. Models of products by images ..... 64

4.3.4. Models of products by uniqueness of ideas .............. 67

4.3.5. Summary: The total product ....... 69

4.3.6. Models of products by psychological needs .............. 71

4.3.7. Models of feed-back products as answer to psychological needs 75

4.4. The questions of the study and its assumptions.............................. 76

Chapter 5: The Method ................................... 78

  1. The research sample ..................... 78

5.2. The variables ........................... 79

5.3. The process of the study ................ 79

5.4. The means of evaluation ................. 81

5.4.1. Literary analysis by structure, sound and images ................. 82

5.4.2. Content analysis of products and feed-back .................... 82

5.4.3. Analysis by psychological needs (according to Maslow Hierarchy) .. 83

5.4.4. The tools of research ............ 83

5.4.5. The reliability of the research tools ................... 85

5.4.6. Methods of product analysis ...... 86

5.4.6.1. Method of feed-back analysis ................ 86

Chapter 6: Findings ..................................... 88

  1. Structure findings ...................... 88

6.1.1. Number of words .................. 88

6.1.2. Number of lines .................. 91

6.2. "Me" findings ........................... 92

6.2.1. Number of "Me" words and their verbs .................. 92

6.2.2. Intensity of relation to self in the products .................. 101

6.2.3. The nature of the connection between the speaking "me" and the subject....................... 104 6.3. Sound findings .......................... 111

  1. Rythms ........................... 111

6.3.2. Rhymes ........................... 116

6.3.3. Repetitions of words.............. 120

6.3.4. Anaphoras ........................ 124

6.4. Image findings - The wealth of the "world of images" ....................... 127

6.5. Findings related to the world of feelings................................. 130

6.5.1. Emotions ......................... 131 6.5.2. The general attitude of the speaking "me" ................... 136

6.5.3. General attitude and emotions .... 140

6.6. Content findings ........................ 143

6.6.1. Number of characteristics ........ 143

6.6.2. Number of categories ............. 147

6.6.3. Content analysis of categories ... 150

6.7. Psychological needs analysis findings ... 152

6.8. Feed-back content analysis findings ..... 159

6.9. Matching the findings ................... 162

Chapter 7: Discussion and Conclusions ................... 165

Epilog .................................................. 193

References .............................................. 195

Appendixes:

Appendix I *Product Analysis - Forms................... 225

Appendix II **Examples of Products of Creative Poetry Therapy Workshops.......... 233